Hohei, The Walking Armory

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

Hohei [Walking Armory]

NAME: Hohei [Walking Armory]/ Bijuu Kowasu Norikumiin [Tailed Beast Buster] WEAPON TYPE: Puppet RANK: A APPEARANCE: Arguably the biggest puppet ever made, Hohei is fifteen foot tall puppet. The puppet's metal body is made of varying colors, mostly sticking to white, red, and yellow. Its head is mostly white, with two spikes on the back of each cheek. On its read forehead, it has a yellow ornament with one spike on each side. On the top its shoulders sits two lights. On its red bulky shoulders are two blood orange plates, hinting at a trap underneath. Its chest is white, with two blue downward facing spikes. The rest of the upper torso is red, with a white core. It also has a red combat skirt with two yellow pockets on the front. Its legs are long, bulky, and white. The upper parts of its flat feet are white, with the bottom half being red. Both its fore arms are white, while the bottom half of the arms are red. The shield on its senbon cannon is also red, while the cannon itself is black. SPOILER: Click to show {Image because I suck at describing stuff} ABILITIES: Solo Puppet Hohei cannot be used along side any other puppets, regardless of the user's skill. To use any puppets along side this would merely get in the way. Suit Hohei is summoned around the summoner, turning it into a suit of armor, the puppeteer staying in side the torso. This allows them to control the puppet from the inside with the puppet acting as an armor. However this does require the user to know Kugutsu: Suishō-kyūlink. One Puppet, One Owner Hohei had Yasei's chakra poured into it when the parts were forged, and of course into it every time it was used. As such any and all functions will respond ONLY to Yasei's chakra signature. GIANT FRIGGIN METAL PUPPET OF THE DESSERT Hohei is obviously huge and metallic. Because of this it can take a beating. Hohei's size and sheer weight make it powerful, capable of destroying mountains with its Army Knife. On top of this, the puppet's armor is three feet thick, (six feet in the torso) making damaging it with anything but the best weaponry and highest taijutsu useless. Its metal is also temperature resistant, making C-rank and lower fire ninjutsu useless. Flash Photography On the head, where the green glass is, is a large light bulb. Should it be activated, it will create a blinding flash of light that can be seen anywhere from a 100 meter radius. Anyone within 50 meters of said light is blinded for two posts, while others are merely stunned for a few seconds do to how far away they are from the light. Kunai Shower A pair of rapid fire cannons are concealed within the clavicle armor of the Hohei. These shoot 400 kunai that cover an area of twenty meters at such high speeds that the kunai break upon impact with any stronger materials, the sheer force being enough to kill most shinobi. These kunai are all normally used up after four posts of continuous fire. OVERLY UNNECESSARILY LARGE SHURIKEN THROW OF DOOM!!! Ninety Six Shuriken are stored within the shoulders and front skirts of the Hohei. These can be launched in a specific way to follow their targets, as well as have chakra strings attached to them to adjust their movements. Chest Kunai Typhoon Two stronger versions of the Kunai Shower Cannons are mounted in Hohei's chest. When in use, the chest armor opens up, and kunai are fired. They are powerful enough to severely wound those who can survive the Kunai Shower Cannons. These can be fired for two posts straight. Senbon Cannon Mounted over the left forearm, the Senbon Cannon also comes with a shield. This weapon can deal serious damage even to the hardest of metals. It fires senbon, at high speeds. Do to this being the main weapon of Hohei and the only one without the element of surprise, the Senbon Cannon has the most ammunition of all the weaponry in its arsenal, totaling to one thousand Senbon, totaling up to ten post of ammo if fired continuously. Should these ten posts be used, the spikes on its cheeks can be loaded into the cannon for four more posts of continuous fire. Army Knife Mounted in the right forearm, is a rarely used feature of Hohei, a hidden blade. Used only when facing a strong enemy that has survived through ALL of his ammunition. Armament Mode Typically used alongside Army Knife when all ammunition is used up. Directly under the armor rest several mechanical muscles that move the puppet. However in most cases most of them are loose and unused to make room for the hidden weaponry, leaving only what is necessary to let the puppet move and keep up with jonin level shinobi. However when all of the traps are used up, and the things holding the ammo jettisoned, the once loose and unused muscles tighten and take up all available space, turning Hohei into a physical power house.

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after much discussion staff is leaning to a Bijuu sized puppet being much too taxing for one puppeteer to handle and would require around three or four, so either shrink the puppet considerably or add in that it takes multiple users.

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

isn't the fact that I have to be a jonin and focus all of my strings (or magnet release in my case) on this one puppet enough to make that a draw back?

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no not at all the puppet is much too large for one user and would require an entire team to use effectively while still being exhausted after...also what do you mean by using jiton to control it

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

edits made

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remove the picture as its causing you to neglect writing out the appearance in its entirety

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

I expanded the information of the appearance. I'd rather not remove the image because it is a giant pain in the *** for me to describe something that complex without help.

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I second Red's thoughts that the picture does not constitute as appearance. The image can serve as a guide, but no a crutch. It needs to be written out. If you really need help, consider asking staff.

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

is

"Arguably the biggest puppet ever made, Hohei is fifteen foot tall puppet. The puppet's metal body is made of varying colors, mostly sticking to white, red, and yellow. Its' design is a strange one like that out of a manga, with spikes areas, and a heavily sci-fi ish design. There are several ares that hint at its traps, but even an expert puppeteer will have a hard time telling if these hold traps or are there for design. On its left arm is its only obvious weapon, a dual barrel shielded gun."

that bad?

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its not bad its just not finished which is why I asked you to remove the picture as you are using it in liue of actually writing up the entire appearance of the puppet like if you used that description without the picture I would have no idea what the puppet looked like also stay away from words like Manga and sci fi and double barrel gun

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

IT'S FINALLY DONE! ;~; my internet cut out every time I finished or tried to post it.

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the issue I am having with the description is that you are basically just describing the picture. The only time you go into detail is about color, which is why if the picture was not there I would have only a vague idea what the puppet looked like. I would say scrape the picture and try simplifying the appearance of the puppet giving yourself a better chance to create an adequate description.

[Yasei Chikamatsu]

...I cann't describe it's design without repeating bulky over and over again. The other puppets did not require anywhere near the level of detail you are asking me for this app over merely what it looked like. Why is this different?

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there is no difference in the other puppets you had a solid paragraph detailing what the puppet looks like with this puppet you tell me what color it is and which is basically you just describing the picture. Again if you do not have the capabilities of describing the actual puppet besides what color it is and a few of its accessories you may want to try simplifying the design so that you can.