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Post by Deleted on Nov 11, 2016 11:36:51 GMT -5
 APP TITLE | NAME: Chakura no Ito: Eda [Chakra Threads: Branch] RANK: B TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: medium DESCRIPTION: Designed to compliment the Skillful Achievement with a Human Body, the technique creates threads that penetrate into the body. Once a thread is inside the body, it then branches into ten, smaller threads that are used to send signals to the opponent's body, where five sub-threads enter the five cardinal points of the body (head, arms, legs) while the others line the spine, effectively disrupting their nervous system. The strength of the control increases with the number of chakra strings, such that Shō's influence is nearly irresistible at ten threads. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 14, 2016 12:54:45 GMT -5
This is completed.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 11:11:59 GMT -5
Shirohigi: Jikki Chikamatsu no Shū
- If you'd be willing to humor me and submit the actual posts as equipment, I'd appreciate it. While I understand the nature of the technique, each puppet (while part of a set) are still individual to some degree. You can keep the summaries of each in the technique if you'd like however.
- For the puppets that have specific ninja skill-based attributes (fuuin/tai/buki/etc.) could you give a brief description in the technique to what each puppet can do?
Kurohigi — Kiki Sanpatsu
- bump the chakra cost to medium please.
- You also mention Kankuro.
- what is the distance the user can effectively use this?
Kurohigi Kiki Ippatsu
- bump the chakra cost to low please
- You also mention Kankuro.
- what is the distance the user can effectively use this?
Chakura no Ito: Eda
- Given that this technique affects a target's nervous system I'd ask this to be bumped up to B-rank. However, I'm willing to compromise and have the chakra cost be medium. I personally just don't feel comfortable with something of this nature being both low rank and low chakra cost, given the implied skill needed.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 12:02:46 GMT -5
I deleted the other three.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 13:53:12 GMT -5
Chakura no Ito: Eda
- if you can bump the chakra cost to medium, you have my 1/2
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 14:04:25 GMT -5
done
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 14:14:47 GMT -5
1/2
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 19:11:07 GMT -5
2/2
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Post by Bel on Jul 11, 2017 6:31:37 GMT -5
All Jutsu are being Re-reviewed, as the staff has come under the impression that we may have been too lenient with what we allowed to exist. As such ALL Jutsu must now be re evaluated and if needed, edited. We hope this doesn't inconvenience you too much. A staff member shall review you shortly and tell you want needs editing, if it needs edits at all.
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