Youseikei Personal Scorch Release Jutsu

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Scorch Release Armor

NAME: -- Scorch Release Chakra Armour RANK: -- A TECH TYPE: -- Personal / Kekkei Genkai ELEMENT: -- Scorch CHAKRA USAGE: -- Very High (moderate constant consumption) DESCRIPTION: -- This hidden technique developed by Haru herself. By using her extraordinary chakra control, she can envelope herself in an aura of scorch release chakra. This aura is invisible to the naked eye, the only visible effect being the appearance of heat waves coming off of her body. The thickness of said aura varies depending on the amount of chakra put into the technique. Her control over this technique is massive as she can envelop any part of her body in scorch release such as an arm or even just a finger while leaving the rest of her body unprotected. The power of this technique comes from the massive temperature that surrounds Haru when it is active. The temperature is hot enough to turn sand into glass, melt steel, and melt stone. It is said; while this is active, that nothing can touch her. Her heat can evaporate more than just physical substances while this is active, as she can even evaporate pure chakra constructs. The normal radius of this Jutsu is 10 meters; however, this can be reduced if Haru desires. This technique not only amplifies the defensive abilities of Haru; but also gives boosts to speed and offensive attacks. It can also allow her to fly via jet propulsion due to the immense heat generated by her aura. It also protects her from other outside sources of heat. Any technique or weapon (A rank or lower) that uses heat for damage is negated.  Misc: A-rank weapons / Chakra constructs take 3 posts to destroy/evaporate; B-Rank would take 2 posts; C-Rank 1 post; and D-rank instantly A kage with C level tai spec can only be around you for one post until they start boiling/evap B 2 and A 3 . This is not considering SAs of course.

Scorch Vision

NAME: -- Scorch Release: Scorch Vision RANK: -- A TECH TYPE: -- Personal / Kekkei Genkai ELEMENT: -- Scorch CHAKRA USAGE: -- Very Low - Very High DESCRIPTION: -- This hidden technique developed by Haru herself. By using her extraordinary chakra control, she can focus Scorch release chakra through her eyes; using her pupils as a sort of 'focusing lens'. Her eyes will burn red and a flash of intense scorch release chakra will shoot outward in any direction she is looking at. This beam/blast is sudden and requires no hand seals. Even more so; what makes this truly deadly, is that it cannot be seen by the naked eye. The intensity of the heat can be controlled as well as the width of the beam. A low amount of chakra is enough to turn ice to steam; while a high amount of chakra would be enough to incinerate an area the size of a few city blocks. This beam carries all the properties of scorch release and is extremely hard to defend against due to how fast the attack is. The best option is to dodge the attack altogether. Water based techniques of equal power CAN be used to block the attack if they can move fast enough to block the attack. The range of this technique is 15 meters. Maximum width is 120 degrees in front of the user in the shape of a cone. What makes this technique only usable by Haru is the fact that she is the only one with the precise enough chakra control to be able to manipulate her chakra through her eye sockets to control the beam of raging scorch release chakra.

Scorch Combustion

NAME: -- Scorch Release: Scorch Combustion RANK: -- A TECH TYPE: -- Personal / Kekkei Genkai ELEMENT: -- Scorch CHAKRA USAGE: -- Very Low - Very High DESCRIPTION: -- This hidden technique developed by Haru herself. By using her extraordinary chakra control, she can focus scorch release through the center of her forehead and shoot a thin beam of scorch release to any area within her field of vision. As the beam travels; it can be ignited, causing the surrounding air to rapidly expand at an incredible rate causing an explosion. This technique is similar to Heat Vision; but different in the fact that it is not a constant stream of heat; but rather a bomb/explosion type technique. What is also different is the fact that the beam from this attack can be controlled and 'curved' or 'bent' in order to hit targets behind obstacles or barriers. The explosion of this technique can be as small as a fire-cracker to large enough to destroy a few city blocks. The range of this technique is 100 meters.  What makes this technique only usable by Haru is the fact that she is the only one with the precise enough chakra control to be able to manipulate her chakra through her forehead and manipulate the energy within the scorch release beam to cause a proper combustion.

[uta]

Finished

[Bel]

Helloooo, Bel here. I like what you've got here, but we have a few issues.

Scorch Release Chakra Armor

After talking to the other staff members, it’s been decided that you will be allowed to melt/evaporate Chakra constructs. However, Chakra would take longer than tradition materials and substances. Elemental releases come into play as well, some things like lava or water would either not be affected or take longer. Give a post limit as to how long it would take to melt chakra constructs. Being that this is an A rank jutsu, lower rank chakra constructs would evaporate fairly quickly, however as stated it would depends on the element. I’m going to suggest that B ranks would take 2 posts, and A rank 3 posts to evaporate. D ranks would disappear the same post as they are affected or almost instantly whereas C ranks might take one post depending on the jutsu and/or element. My suggestion earlier should also apply to some weapons, as A ranked weapons would be very hard to destroy. However things such as average shinobi tools, Kunai shuriken would more than likely melt same post.

Also, shinobi would also go by the suggestion. However, it should take longer for shinobi to die versus an inanimate object, just for rp reasons. It would be safe to assume that a shinobi with a taijutsu skill of a-rank would have at least the required or minimum amount of durability/endurance or defense of their rank, even without SAs. So, they would be able to withstand the intense heat longer than shinobi of a lower rank. Shinobi with certain SA’s would take longer than this to be effected by the jutsu.

As for a few minor things, I'd like you to put the chakra cost at high, and then pust a constant medium drain next to it.

Scorch Release: Scorch Vision

You mention that you can control width of said beams. Please state the maxium spread of the beams. Also, what is it that makes this technique only able to be used by you? This would, from what I am seeing, be a Clan Technique.

Scorch Release: Scorch Combustion

Same issue as earlier, what makes this so that only you can use it? It seems much more like a clan only techique. Also you mention destroying a LARGE portion of a city. You either need to down grade this to a couple of blocks or change it to S-rank.

[uta]

Done I do believe.

[Bel]

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[Bel]

All Jutsu are being Re-reviewed, as the staff has come under the impression that we may have been too lenient with what we allowed to exist. As such ALL Jutsu must now be re evaluated and if needed, edited. We hope this doesn't inconvenience you too much. A staff member shall review you shortly and tell you want needs editing, if it needs edits at all.

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first and foremost are you still around