Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2017 13:31:35 GMT -5
Heyo Belac here,
simply put, I'd like to edit the second jutsu here. I recently rewatched the Rasengan training (for shiz and giggles) and noticed that both Jariya and Naruto had actually used a Rasengan that had passed the first two stages of training, but not the third (just like my second jutsu. On top of that, it is much more powerful than what I described. What I had written was:
"A jutsu based off the second step of creating Rasengan. Kajō creates the begining step of Rasengan, a crap ton of spiraling chakra. While to the untrained eye it would seem he had made the Rasengan, one would see the chakra is wild with no form. After the user hits their enemy, the enemy will be knocked back ten feet, feeling as though a powerful punch had just hit their gut. Afterwards the jutsu 'pops' and shoots spiraling chakra discs at near by enemies, the strength being the same as the first part, but without the knock back."
What I'd like to replace it with is:
"A jutsu based off the second step of creating Rasengan. Kajō creates the beginning step of Rasengan, a crap ton of spiraling chakra, and then follows the second step, focusing it into a small ball the size of his palm. While to the untrained eye it would seem he had made the Rasengan, one would see the chakra is shaped into a ball, it isn't well contained, with chakra occasionally spiraling off before looping back into the ball. When hitting the opponent, the 'Rasengan' will begin to burst, but not as weakly as before. This time there is a huge burst of chakra, creating a shallow spiralling cut on the contacted area. While not deadly on areas like the torso or limbs, it is very very painful. On top of this, should it hit the face (and by extension cut the neck), it can kill with that one hit."
simply put, I'd like to edit the second jutsu here. I recently rewatched the Rasengan training (for shiz and giggles) and noticed that both Jariya and Naruto had actually used a Rasengan that had passed the first two stages of training, but not the third (just like my second jutsu. On top of that, it is much more powerful than what I described. What I had written was:
"A jutsu based off the second step of creating Rasengan. Kajō creates the begining step of Rasengan, a crap ton of spiraling chakra. While to the untrained eye it would seem he had made the Rasengan, one would see the chakra is wild with no form. After the user hits their enemy, the enemy will be knocked back ten feet, feeling as though a powerful punch had just hit their gut. Afterwards the jutsu 'pops' and shoots spiraling chakra discs at near by enemies, the strength being the same as the first part, but without the knock back."
What I'd like to replace it with is:
"A jutsu based off the second step of creating Rasengan. Kajō creates the beginning step of Rasengan, a crap ton of spiraling chakra, and then follows the second step, focusing it into a small ball the size of his palm. While to the untrained eye it would seem he had made the Rasengan, one would see the chakra is shaped into a ball, it isn't well contained, with chakra occasionally spiraling off before looping back into the ball. When hitting the opponent, the 'Rasengan' will begin to burst, but not as weakly as before. This time there is a huge burst of chakra, creating a shallow spiralling cut on the contacted area. While not deadly on areas like the torso or limbs, it is very very painful. On top of this, should it hit the face (and by extension cut the neck), it can kill with that one hit."
