Heizento Clan | Dead Clan [FIN]

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I decided to open this up to scrutiny. Have at it D:

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remove the mentions of the Rikudo there was no such person on this site

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Mentions removed, and clan emblem added.

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just to make sure you understand that this clan and the eye will be open to others to use this has my 1/2

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The second stage of this doujutsu violates the No Power Playing Rule.

At this stage, the Heizento gains the ability to view the bioelectircal currents within themselves and other beings. This vision is typically limited to the brain until a non-happenstance signal is directed towards a body part; however, the ability to perceive these currents regardless of an individual's intent is considered a sign of mastery.

Within the mind's eye, this manifests as rays of light that shine through the aforementioned biochemical web, forming shadows that morph when a signal is sent from the brain. For those who master this version of the sight, the light forms a single shadow in the shape of a person, instead, which shows highly detailed information on even the slightest of movements. Moreover, because said signals are sent before the body can actually move, there is great predictive ability granted to those who unlock Stage Two. This is particularly true for those who master Stage Two's sight, as they have occasionally been known to view coherent thought. (Even rarer wielders of the Dōjutsu have been known to, after viewing coherent thought for a time, project it.) Of course, this also grants the Hitogan great piercing ability against Genjutsu.

I've spoken with other staff members and this seems like an enhanced version of the Sharingan's predictive abilities. Basically, the Sharingan's version isn't a definitive prediction and is only the Uchiha guessing the opponent's next move. While this doujutsu is basically able to tell the next move without fail. Even if the opponent were to change their mind mid movement a person with this ability would know.

While Doujutsu that have similarities with canon doujutsu are allowed and encouraged. We want members to be more original when creating them. Not just finding a creative and elaborate way to not only copy but strengthen the capabilities of a canon doujutsu.

Thus, the second stage grants the Heizento the "power of projection" and the "power of manifestation", where the Heizento is able to manifest their emotions, feelings, intent, and mood into the real world as a telepathic projection, as well as the ability to manifest their will upon a target, all via the ability of the second stage of the Hitogan to affect both the biochemistry and the bioelectricity of foreign and domestic bodies. The process is represented in the mind's eye as the manipulation of the target's web and shadow and is much more akin to drugs and psychedelics than Genjutsu. It is the "soul manifesting its own reality", the Heizento call it, a sacred ninjutsu that is considered to be a participation in divinity.

As with the ability to sense emotions, feelings, intent, mood, and temperament, the ability to project them can only be done within a certain range, which demands practice so that the range can be increased. It is also possible to graduate from projection to manipulation, where the emotions of the target are actively manipulated. With greater practice, impression also becomes possible; this is where emotions are fabricated by the Heizento and fed into the brain

This is over-powered even by Rebellion standards. For one if it's not like genjutsu and more of drugs and stuff. How are you able to do it? Do you send chakra to the person? Because a drug has to be administered. Better yet, how will one defend against their emotions being manipulated? Despite nothing being banned, there has to be drawbacks within abilities, jutsu and shinobi. I don't see any drawbacks or ways for shinobi to counter the abilities mentoned.

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I don't feel like changing or arguing or explaining anything, so you can archive this.