Shō's Personal Techniques [FIN]

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NAME: Sōzō no Konton Kaiki [Chaotic Regression of Creation] RANK: S TECH TYPE: Personal | Konbijutsu, Kekkai Ninjutsu, Fūinjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Very High DESCRIPTION: Having created this technique after Katsuyu gave him the Katsu no In, Shō designed this technique as an absolute defense against extreme calamity. In the heart of the village sits a seal formed through the flesh and blood and chakra of both Katsuyu and Shō. The seal constantly absorbs the chakra of the two beings through the Katsu no In seal, combining it into a perfect mixture of collaborative energy. Once the seal has been released, a powerful kekkai ninjutsu forms around the village as a dome, possessing enough power to withstand multiple Bijūdama. Moreover, the barrier has the unique ability to detect village-busting scaled techniques that are casted within the barrier. In such cases, the barrier can apportion its chakra to activate the now-dormant seal within the village’s heart, trapping the technique while weakening the barrier itself. The barrier also has a rudimentary alert system. When it senses danger, it will glow with the colors of the rainbow, alarming all who see it. If the barrier begins to sound semi-sentient, that is because it is. Having sacrificed some of his life force in order to “seal” a portion of spirit into the barrier, Shō’s will is present within the barrier at all times. However, it will only become active once he dies; which will itself cause the barrier to activate. While the bareier offers a great defense, it should be understood that it does not prevent anyone from entering the village. In other words, Sunagakure can still be invaded. Moreover, so long as either Katsuyu or Shō are alive, the barrier can be restored with their chakra. However, if only one of the two is alive to repair it, the barrier will steadily weaken, becoming a shell of its former self. NAME: Ōken no Yūdaina Hyōji [Majestic Display of Kingship] RANK: S TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Medium to Very High DESCRIPTION: An expansion of Shō's Majestic Display of Nobility technique, Majestic Display of Kingship allows him to replicate this concept on a grander scale, establishing telepathic connections between multiple people at once (the range is limited to his ability to perceive people through the dōjutsu). This grants his allies the ability to perceive each others minds as if they were feeling their own emotions. With Shō acting as the "mother-brain", he is then able to speak to his allies, view the world through them, and coordinate actions with pinpoint precision, even able to project his presence as if on the battlefield (although to a reduced degree). The technique is also effective at linking enemies to the connection as well, which could serve to reduce enemy morale in cases where ally fervor, morale, and determination are high. The base range expands to 200 meters. NAME: Otoko no Konton Kaiki [Chaotic Regression of Man] RANK: S TECH TYPE: Personal | Iryō Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Medium to Very High DESCRIPTION: A high-level iryō ninjutsu that combines the concepts behind sister techniques In'yu Shōmetsu and Saibō no Kasseijutsu, requiring unprecedented levels of chakra control in order to perform. First, Shō flows chakra throughout his entire body. This chakra saturates every fiber of the body, rejuvenating it. The cell recreation process is then activated, and the body begins to pre-emptively heal before damage is actually done to it. Immediately after this, Shō increases the chakra control immensely, focusing the chakra specifically towards the individual cells of the body, activating them. This is increases the overall healing rate of the body to such a degree that any wounds dealt to it are healed within seconds. Moreover, since the cells themselves are hyper-activated, the technique's ability to reduce or minimize damage is exponentially increased. These two factors together allow Shō to endure extreme amounts of damage without fear of death. However, despite the technique's miraculous healing ability, it can not heal injuries such as a severed spine, for example, as the technique requires Shō's conscious ability to manipulate his body, and thus his chakra. However, when channeled through other people, the technique can heal all injuries within very short periods of time. NAME: In'yu Shōmetsu [Yin Healing Wound Destruction] RANK: A TECH TYPE: Personal | Iryō Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Very Low to Very High DESCRIPTION: A medical ninjutsu where one anticipates the spot the enemy will attack and pre-emptively applies medical treatment to it, reducing damage to a minimum. The user concentrates chakra to that area and begins the cell recreation process even before the targeted area becomes damaged. Using opponent's facial expression and movements, the technique's speed and power, the user analyses everything in an instant and accurately deduces where the attack will land. Even more than accurately predicting the attack or instantly gauging the situation, a great resilience is necessary, so one might say this technique is exclusive to Shō. Because the technique can also be used on a patient during medical procedures, it also helps to increase the chance of a patient's survival during surgery; or can be used for more nefarious purposes, such as torture. NAME: Katsu no In [Seal of Divison] RANK: A TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Very Low to Very High DESCRIPTION: Given only by the slug Katsuyu, the Seal of Division was primarily designed as a way for Katsuyu to teach Senjutsu. Because of this, the seal is intimately connected to her. Besides the usage of the seal as a way for Katsuyu to transfer her chakra to Shō, the technique also connects Shō to Katsuyu, which is key to the slug's healing power, as its healing power depends on the strength of the seal and the seal’s strength depends on how much chakra Shō has stored within it. The basis of the technique is for Shō to store chakra within a single point on his forehead, similar to the Byakugo no In, providing shape and form to the seal (this appears as dot on the forehead). This creates the connection between the seal (which is itself formed from Katsuyu's flesh and blood, transcribed into Shō’s forehead) and Katsuyu, thus connecting Katsuyu to Shō as an extension of herself and vice-verse. While this also allows Shō to draw upon Katsuyu’s chakra, it should be noted that doing so weakens the seal fairly quickly. NAME: Heiwa no Yūdaina Hyōji [Majestic Display of Nobility] RANK: A TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Medium DESCRIPTION: The technique sacrifices the vision in one of Shō’s eyes for the ability to share and project thought. This is a permanent exchange, granting Shō a second sight of a sort. Within a base fifty meter range, Shō is able to detect mental activity in the surrounding environment, allowing him to target foreign bodies for the technique’s use. Defending against the technique is a matter of mindfulness, where mindfulness is defined as the ability question one’s own thoughts and actions, determine their source, and then deal with them accordingly, so that those who are especially mindful are able to more quickly and resolutely affect their own thinking than others. However the “resolutely” aspect of the defense is also key, as one who does away with the thoughts quickly without resolution will find them recurring once again, which can cause even worse effects on the person than otherwise possible. NAME: Katsu: Gomuheki [Division: Rubber Wall] RANK: B TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Medium DESCRIPTION: A summoning technique that apportions Katsuyu's flesh into the form of a large wall. The wall is incredibly effective against blunt force trauma and non-piercing attacks, and incredibly ineffective against piercing and cutting attacks, while also doubling as an effective trapping mechanism, as the flesh can be controlled so as to fold in on itself, or either to “absorb” any solid matter that comes into contact with it. It is able to absorb up to A-rank trauma from blunt and concussive forces without damage, and given the flesh's ability to self-repair if it is still intact, the wall can only be destroyed in single blows. With cutting and piercing attacks, even rudimentary kunai strikes will slice and pierce through the flesh like butter. NAME: Sonshō Keisū [Pressure] RANK: B TECH TYPE: Personal | Fūinjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Low DESCRIPTION: A somewhat obscure technique, Pressure is meant as a defensive maneuever, activating at the moment of contact with an opponent. In that instant, Shō and the target freeze in space, all movement and momentum halting as if time stopped, both bodies sealed at their fixed points in space. This “sealing” prevents any damage that occurs to the bodies from showing while the bodies are sealed, which would appear to the untrained eye as if the rules of reality were being bent. However, what happens is simply that the body is held together. Even if pierced, for example, the wound the would seal up as if nothing happened. However, once the seal is deactivated, the body will become unsealed and the damage will appear. While the seal is in place, its effect on the body causes a great pressure to bear down on Shō on the target. If held long enough by the technique, muscles will begin to tear, and bones will begin crack. How long depends on the constitution of the person’s body however (age, sex, build, etc). It should also be mentioned that while the technique is able to nullify the full damage of an attack against Shō, it does not nullify the damage at the point of impact. This makes the technique vulnerable to attacks that are like the Hyū’s Gentle Fist, where the damage has nothing to do with the “follow through” of a strike. NAME: Kakumeigo no Ishi [Will of the Revolutionary] RANK: B TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Low DESCRIPTION: Deriving from his Majestic Display of Nobility technique, Shō is able to insert certain thoughts into the minds of his target(s). When activated, the target will experience a sensation of sudden comfort, followed by a sense of peace, and afterward a sense of great relaxation. Due to the sudden change in their emotions, mood, and temperament (even more so considering that technique was made for field applications), the target is stunned, causing their actions to cease. This only lasts for a brief period, but still long enough for the target to contemplate their thoughts. In this moment of pacification, Shō is then able to try and reason with the target as a way to end the conflict. While meant for the field, it should be noted that the technique is not efficient as an actual combat technique. Even though it does create a temporary lapse within the target that could theoretically be exploited, the lapse is actually circumstantial, dependent upon the sign-of-goodwill of non-engagement. If an attack is launched, this will cause the brain to naturally become immediately combat ready, thus dispelling the lapse. NAME: Katsu: Gomu Hontai [Division: Rubber Body] RANK: C TECH TYPE: Personal | Niniutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: high DESCRIPTION: A technique where Shō summons a thick layer of Katsuyu's flesh around her body. Using her chakra to keep the flesh compacted and inconspicios, it produces a thin barrier that is able to absorb blunt force trauma. Moreover, Katsuyu’s healing abilities can also transmit through the flesh-barrier, healing whatever damage may manage to get through the flesh-barrier’s shock absorbijg qualities. The flesh is, however, easily pierced and easily cut. In terms of concussive forces, the flesh can fully absorb concussive and blunt trauma up to B-rank. However, even rudimentary kunai strikes will slice through the flesh like butter. NAME: Doton: Irekae [Earth Release: Shift] RANK: C TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: Doton CHAKRA USAGE: Low DESCRIPTION: A very practical technique from his childhood, Shō places his palms against the ground and creates a shift in the earth below the target’s feet, creating a great upheavel that leaves the target within a large ditch. Along with the benefit of robbing the target of their balance and footing, the shifted earth can then be controlled and shaped as Shō sees fit, allowing him to either attack, defend, or trap, all in the same moment. The ditch created is ten yards is diameter. NAME: Katsu: Shutsugen [Division: Emergence] RANK: C TECH TYPE: Personal | Ninjutsu ELEMENT: None CHAKRA USAGE: Very Low to Very High DESCRIPTION: Exploiting Katsuyu’s ability to divide, Shō summons miniature versions of the slug from any idle piece of Katsuyu’s flesh (for example, the Rubber Wall technique), or either the mass of flesh itself will become Katsuyu. The size of the Kastuyu depend upon how large Shō desires them to be. Like miniature Katsuyu summoned through normal means, these replica have access to her abilites.

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This is completed.

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I am confused is the chikamatsu clan supposed to have magnet release

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She is a member of the Sakyū clan, which is where Jiton comes from.

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was a bit confused by the last name

this seems fine to me 1/2

[Ūdemikōshi・Mikijōnara]

Hey there, your neighborhood Witchdoctor here! Hope you're ready for some deep thinking



[Katsu no In]
- can you please add the medium cast as the cost to apply the seal?
- in a similar vein to the Byakugo no In, can you add a very low - very high cost (for the range of how much chakra can be used to heal)/be stored)?
- after these minor things I'm fine with this

[Katsu: Gomuheki]
- I'd like this to be medium at minimum please.
- given it's a b-rank, could you define what it an defend against (Technique/weapon wise)?

[Katsu: Gomu Hontai]
- a brief description of what the flesh can defense against. otherwise this is fine.

[Katsu: Shutsugen]
- what are teh capabilities of the mini Katsuya?
- how big can each slug get?

[Doton: Irekae]
- add dimensions of the ditch and how far the technique can reachplease 

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Before I grade your Jiton techs I wanted to put this disclaimer out there for you so to be totally transparent. As it stands right now, the majority of your Jiton techniques are more akin to the Sakyū clan's Kumo branch. BUT WAIT! Before you go and delete all your techniques, consider this: due to the pride the Sakyū have, each branch tends to only use their variant of Jiton (sand for suna / EM field and metal for kumo). As such, if Shō was to develop techniques that seemed more like the Kumo branch, she would most likely be excommunicated from the clan compound in Suna. There is the alternate option that she more or less rebels against the suna branch clan and chooses to develop the techniques. In either case, she would most likely not be viewed very highly within Suna's branch. 

TL;DR: Shō can have her Jiton techniques be more akin to the Kumo variant (this is acceptable) but by doing so would more than likely bar from using/learning the Suna branch's sand variant. I'd potentially be fine with her starting with the sand techniques, but upon her rebelling/excommunication she could no longer learn said "sand" techniques. With all that said...

[Jiton: Tate]
- this needs a rank please
- how far in front of Shō does the wall appear?

[Jiton: Dairokkan]
- range please
- bump the cost to low and constant please

[Jiton: Kakuchō]
- I am assuming the range this can affect depends on the uijiba base tech. if this is the case, please add that it. If not, please specify the range this technique can affect.

[Jiton: Kūryoku]
- you mention "depending on how strong the charge is she can move faster or slower". Can you make the chakra cost very low - low (or higher if you intend to do so)

[Jiton: Yokuatsu]
- this is fine

[Jiton: Yō]
- for this to pin a target to the ground, I'd prefer either this be bumped to b-rank or chakra up to high
- how far can this reach?

[Jiton: Hitei]
-  can you specify to what degree of poweful katon techniques please?

[Jiton: Idaina Gyakuten]
- you mentions it disrupt light. this is fine, but to what extent? Does she become invisible? Just flesh this out a bit more please.
- instead of two times per day, twice per thread will suffice
- given the nature of the technique, bump the cost to high please
- can you specify to what extent attacks/weapons can be stopped
- for Genjutsu, how would this affect Gen initiated via sound, smell or touch (a la vibrations)?

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I've changed these up again. Most of the techniques are the same, though. Still unsure about the Yin Healing tech and how that works, so I left it there.