Hyūga Umehime | Genin | Konohagakure

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Appearance: Usually, I would allow for someome to use a good picture like yours for their application as it shows their entire appearance. However, staff have already told another member that even with a picture the description is still needed. So could you be a dear and add in a lil paragraph of appearance.

Hyūga Clan Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan

The Byakugan ["White Eye"], is their bloodline. It is a Dōjutsu. The first of abilities are, when activated, the Byakugan gives a near 360º vision, except for a small blind spot at their first thoracic vertebrae. The range varies from user to user, but in general, they are capable of seeing from a minimum of 10 meters, all the way up to a maximum of 20 kilometers, and the amount grows with training, ability and age. Umehime's vision is limited to the 10 meters for now.

This vision is telescopic, allowing users to see through solid objects, such as Smoke screens and walls. Arguably its greatest ability is to see chakra in all its natures, including its flow and the circulation system inside the body with great detail, as well as the color of chakra; giving them the ability to discern clones from the original. Like the Sharingan and Rinnegan, the Byakugan can detect chakra sealed barriers, as well as determine when Genjutsu is being used. This will allow Umehime to work on her distance eye as well, that way she can also be a sensor type for her team, or whoever she is partnered with.

It is from the Byakugan's especially acute perception of chakra and ability to view the tenketsu of the human body that the Hyuuga Clan are able to employ their signature fighting style: Gentle Fist. Able to strike without force, and yet do more damage to a ninja than some of the most powerful Ninjutsu, the Gentle Fist has been labelled as the greatest Taijutsu style known in all of Konohagakure. This aspect of the eye depends heavily upon the distance eye as those with a low level within the distance eye would not be able to see as far or use their Byakugan as effectively as someone with a high level distance eye. However, Umehime's eyes have indeed grown to where she can see the Tenketsu, points on the chakra system, that takes much longer for other Hyūga her age to see.

The two SAs you chose would go under your Kekkei Genkai/Hiden speciality. You've mentioned the Byakugan in this KKG/Hiden speciality already, so you can just do away with this SA, for another.

Gentle Fist
One of the most famed styles of Konohagakure no Sato and undoubtedly the only style which relies on light strikes, hence the name; but still incredibly powerful at dispatching foes. It is a close range hand to hand combat that works on strikes, blocks and redirection. The style works by attacking an opponent's chakra pathway system, which are closely interlinked with the surrounding organs and muscles. Even the slightest tap can cause severe damage to the organs, giving it's namesake.

This is done by the user surgically injecting their own chakra into the opponent's system, damaging the surrounding organs/muscles/etc.,This is usually performed through the index and middle finger or through their palm. With the aid of the Byakugan they can gain an intricate understanding of the tenketsu, and can open, or close the Tenketsu. This wrecks havoc in itself as inflicting these injuries completely changes the dynamic in people's chakra systems that allow them to mold chakra, that can range from worse chakra control to zero ability to perform ninjutsu.

It should be noted, that any chakra based substance can be destroyed by the Gentle fist, which is done by leaking chakra through their hands into the shape of a protruding needle, or knife-like blade to cut through the opposing chakra.

Because the chakra pathway system is invisible to the naked eye, the Byakugan is required for this style to be used effectively. Since the Byakugan is unique to the Hyuuga clan, it has become their signature style of combat.

Also ones ability with gentle fist, especially the eight trigrams variant of it, correlates directly to ones ability with the precision eye as with a low level of precision, one would not be able to pinpoint the tenketsu as well as hit them during the heat of battle consistently.

Umehime can see the tenketsu clearly. Her ability with the Gentle Fist style continues to amaze people, being called a genius of the precision eye. Having done nothing but focus on the clan's techniques and her Byakugan, she contnues to train them, pushing to move past her current limits as the battle is waged in the mind. Her ability with the style outshines most based on her natural talent with it, being able to keep up with most Hyuga chunin, at so young an age. Regardless, she still works extremely hard, not only to better herself, but to make sure, she improves. Leaf is life, and the Hyūga are the Leaf

This is a Hiden Taijutsu, so like the Byakugan it would go under your Kekkei Genkai/Hiden spec, with a letter grade showing your skill with it. Basically the same as you did for the Byakugan in that section.

We created the spec section in order to expand the SA categories selection. Meaning most "shinobi art" or combat prowess will be mentioned within the specialty section. This gives the member the option for a variety of different SAs including ones that aren't necessarily combat oriented but can be useful in combat. For example the Mizukage has an orator SA which allows him to sway shinobi with his speeches.

If you need help with SAs, maybe go with enhanced endurance or speed. Even things such as beauty or seduction can be an SA.

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