I HAVE WRITTEN 34 POSTS | if it is done with great cause, it is great. If it is done on a whim, it is chaos and disorder. |
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Post by Yasei Chikamatsu on Nov 12, 2016 14:56:37 GMT -5
 Jiton Techniques | NAME: Jiton: Rērugan [Magnet Release: Railgun]RANK: BTECH TYPE: Clan | NinjutsuELEMENT: 磁遁 | Jiton [Magnet Release]CHAKRA USAGE: HighDESCRIPTION:This is a simple but deadly jiton technique. Be it using a coin or any magnetic object, the user adds a large amount of jiton chakra into it, before firing it off with such force that it leaves a fissure in the ground following the trajectory of the object. This item has enough force to kill if it hits an area with vital organs (head, torso, stuff like that), being capable of going through several buildings before stopping. Should it hit a limb, the limb would likely break and bend the wrong way, impeding combat but not killing them. However, the object is only capable of going in a straight line, so should one have the speed and reflexes needed, they can dodge it easily. The launched object can go up to fifteen meters away without loosing speed and can break through any B-rank defenses.NAME: Jiton: Kinzoku Kokkaku no Namida [Magnet Release: Metal Skeleton Tear]RANK: BTECH TYPE: Clan | NinjutsuELEMENT: 磁遁 | Jiton [Magnet Release]CHAKRA USAGE: Very Low-Very High (depends on the size of the puppet, Very Low being a one foot tall puppet, low being anything the size of a child, medium being a full grown man, high being puppets of nine feet tall or larger, and very high being titanic puppets)DESCRIPTION:A Jiton technique that requires knowledge of how a puppet works. One must know much about the metal endo-skeleton that makes up all puppets, as such this technique has been labeled a kugujutsu. The user senses the metal skeleton of a puppet within 15 meters, and makes contact with the puppet. Should the body be made of a metal, the user may force the puppet's skeleton to seize up, resisting its master's wishes, and crush it. Of course, should they crush a puppet with poison mist or some other AOE trap, they will be caught in it too. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2016 4:06:01 GMT -5
Satetsu Ha / Fuyū / Shuriken / Dangan / Kanchi / Tate / Makihige / Sōsō / Kyū / Shigure / Bunshin
- These have already been app'd here and are not necessary. You may use the sakyu techniques with any variation of "dust" without needning to register them as individual techniques due to the effects being the same.Rerugan - needs a range. If it can kill this needs to be B-rank at minimum. Also, can this penetrate defenses? (if yes, to what extent can said object go through)? Kinzoku Kokkaku no Namida - I'd say specify the chakra cost per puppet rank (E: very low, D: low/C, medium, B: high, A/S: very high) Nagai Mojiretsu Kugutsu - This has the same text as Kinzoku Kokkaku no Namida. Assuming this is either an accidental duplicate or the wrong text.
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I HAVE WRITTEN 34 POSTS | if it is done with great cause, it is great. If it is done on a whim, it is chaos and disorder. |
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Post by Yasei Chikamatsu on Nov 13, 2016 4:21:17 GMT -5
Rerugan- edits made
Kinzoku Kokkaku no Namida- "Very Low-Very High (depends on the size of the puppet)" the amount of chakra uses is relative to the size of the puppet itself. It wouldn't make sense for me to waste more chakra on a puppet that is a different size just because its a bit more complex than the other ones.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2016 12:24:38 GMT -5
Rerugan
- Instead of density, would you humor me and put a rank (so if this technique is b-rank, it can pierce through b-rank and below defenses with x chakra, or through a-rank for a heightened chakra cost. or something along those lines). Kinzoku Kokkaku no Namida - Could you add dimensions for each drain level then (so like very low is puppets up to 1ft tall, low is puppets up to 3ft, etc)? Otherwise this is vague enough one could potentially claim an opposing puppet was smaller than than it is. I don't see that necessarily happening any time soon, but to have the extra clarification just to be safe. 
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I HAVE WRITTEN 34 POSTS | if it is done with great cause, it is great. If it is done on a whim, it is chaos and disorder. |
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Post by Yasei Chikamatsu on Nov 13, 2016 13:37:05 GMT -5
done
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2016 19:24:16 GMT -5
1/2
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2016 19:00:54 GMT -5
2/2
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Post by Bel on Jul 11, 2017 13:14:15 GMT -5
All Jutsu are being Re-reviewed, as the staff has come under the impression that we may have been too lenient with what we allowed to exist. As such ALL Jutsu must now be re evaluated and if needed, edited. We hope this doesn't inconvenience you too much. A staff member shall review you shortly and tell you want needs editing, if it needs edits at all.
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